Friday, February 13, 2009

Late Night Homework.

I decided to do this post on my One Sentence Story.

It began A man finds a Pistol with 11 bullets in the clip.

The man ponders where he found the pistol, It finally struck him. He first caught glimpse of the pistol when he woke up the previous morning. A Hot, Humid and Hazy day. He awoke to the smell of burnt toast, But then quickly remembered that he was the only person staying in his 3 room small loft on the edge of Chicago.He placed each foot carefully on the old wooden floorboards, Making sure not to make any excess noise. He tread very carefully avoiding the particular floorboard towards the end of the hallway, That always creaked loudly and for what seemed like minutes. He drew the pistol from the hidden gun compartment in his wall. And turned the safety off. He aimed forward with both hands as he walked as a ninja in complete silence. He Peered into his kitchen and saw a strange man burning something in his over sized sink. It looked as though it was once living. He aimed the Pistol with perfect precision. And as he pulled the trigger, He was hit over the head with a baseball bat. He awoke later the next day to have been robbed of everything in his house. And had slight amnesia, He discovered he had amnesia when he forgot where the pull went. He gazed at his cabinet, To see a quarter sized hole in it....

1 comment:

  1. Ilias
    I love that you expanded your one sentence story! Some good details here (like the burnt toast). Because this is a public post, remember to check for typos and problems with capitalization. (You can select "edit post" under settings to correct these minor errors.) Also remember that you need to post two entries per week to receive full credit.
    Clary

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